Dawn Reports 6

Hey sorry its been awhile since I last wrote been tied up and all. If this is your first time reading Dawn Reports I encourage you to read some of my previous reports and it read and review the Knights of Dawn prologues. Chapter 1 out soon!


Its the driving force to any ambition. Its the backbone to every success. Its hope. without hope there are no means to reach the finish line. No reason press on when the going gets tough. Hope is motivation. The push forward. The helping hand. Hope is the advocate of faith. It brings us to together when we are torn apart. Its our only light when everything has gone dark. Its our saving grace.

"If hope were not so, I would not choose to live"
-Bradley Hathaway
As always I love to hear what you have to say leave comments, reviews, etc. down below.

Since this is rather short, I don't think I can really give a true blown review on this, but seeming since I have nothing better to do and what you have wrote is seemingly good then I must dismiss the TV for five seconds and reply on how much I truly like this.

So, as the first little thing I have written states this is rather short and I think you actually need more if you want to send a message across. Not saying that it doesn't or short peices of text don't convey a message. I'd be lying if I said they didn't, though I believe your peice needed a little bit more to make it really fit with the other brilliant aditions I have so far read.

In retrospect, this does give off a rather good meaning and I was hooked when I started reading through the paragraphs. You use your words wisely and you don't draw on what you have to say. It's short and snappy, and as said above; you could've placed in more, though this still works.

You set off a very convincing image which I find oddly reassuring. Like a magician with magic you have a power with words and I really enjoyed everything you wrote. Really. I wish you wrote more, though I have already stated that numerous of times that I feel like I'm repeating myself. And I am.

The whole concept of this tale isn't something that I can relate to personally though I know a few that can relate to this. I like hope, and I have a lot of it. This is really one of those things that makes me want to hope even more.

Kudos Apple
PS. Next time, write more.

Yet again you make me smile as I read! I say this to everyone! It IS what keeps us going, unless we let go of it. those are the people I feel sorry for.
Forever your faithful fan,
-Lily <3