scenario 1 and 2

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I wrote these for fun as an addition or following to "love the scenario" one of my previous posts in the Other Poetry forum. :D :lol:

# 1 "The others"
Shoot, when, how, her?
There are guys all around her!
She see me, that is good.
What a beauty!
Beauty in the silence
despite the noise of love.
You create it when you shoot
and it becomes a crime.
You meant to take her in the heart.
Instead, you blew up the guys around her.

#2 "circumstance"
Wheeling away;
Another comes by.
You talk and talk for hours
and you think she is the one.
However, she is gaining ground on you
with her blades,
You're on a board and it needs new bearings.




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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm . . . .. .. ??? Whats the point of this?




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The first one really confuses me.

But I do like the second one,
for some reason, since I'm not quite sure what you're getting at.
Someone was saying
something about shadows covering the field, about
how things pass, how one sleeps towards morning
and the morning goes.



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But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane