There once was a planet called Earth,
It twinkled and sparkled with worth,
Then in charged our race,
And trampled the place,
And heated it up like a hearth.
There once was a planet called Earth,
That echoed with laughter and mirth,
Then we outgrew the space,
And filled up the place,
And bled from it all of its worth.
There once was a planet called Earth,
We dreamt it a magical birth,
But more feats of science,
Have lost its alliance,
So now it’s a cosmos of dearth.
) Interesting rhyme at the end there, but I suppose it had to be done. The limericks were pretty neat, they gave the poem a nice flow. On to a critique. The very last stanza felt somewhat off a little. It was the second line of it really. The whole magical thing sort of threw it off for me because right after you speak of science (speaking off which that science/alliance rhyme was really good). The second stanza was my favorite. It just really hit right on that people need to help save the Earth or else destroy it. Good job!