Just Because I sing

No matter what,
I'll always be here.
Singing, doing what I love.
Right now.
So don't look back,
'cause the past is the past.
I'm over it,
now just because I sing don't mean-

Chorus

I don't dance,
I don't love,
I don't see,
oh I see.
That you...
Are something special,
Boy, please.
Get your head out of the clouds.


Just because I sing,
Don't mean I don't love,
Just 'cause I don't care,
Don't mean.....
Just because I sing.

I like it! very fun and cool!
I would like to see you add on to it though!
I give you:

Four green faces for cool-ness

And three for rhyming...

All together that's 7/10
Which is good!!!!

keep writing!

Smexx

Hi there

I liked it. It's nice.

General comments

You might want to add on to it because it is a bit too short. I liked the mood of the song.

Rhyme and Rhythm

It had a good rhyme scheme. It was good as it was not too much and not too little. It was just perfect according to your song. I liked the rhythm of this piece. It flowed pretty well in my head.

Overall

Overall I think it was pretty short, but thats alright. rhyme was good rhythm was good. So overall, the song was pretty good.

Good job

Keep Writing

~Anshita