Futility (part 2)

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Last edited by fhwdf on Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"What if, doctor, we need these knots and these tangles because they're the only things holding our souls down - and if we untied the knots and untangled the tangles and stretched them out ... would our souls just float away?"
~Luke Kennard, A Practical Course in Entry Level Expressionism




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Yeah go me!

Erhm, back to the reviewing. I liked it though, I think you can neaten up the structure of it some how.

I don't how, there are, in my opinion, to many spaces but big whoop. Great job!
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