Fear the truth

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Fear the truth

A feeling in my chest, I do not know its name,
Just going through the motions that are filling up my brain.
Conflicting emotions, they tear me up.
Going through the motions and I think I’ve had enough.

Opportunity comes and I let it go.
I think of what could happen
I guess we will never know.

The naked looks and evil stares.
Is it just me who doesn’t care?
Like a ghost, you feel me drawing near
Trapped inside your own fears.




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Wow! That was captivating. I read the poem a couple of times. Is it talking about a break up? (Just curious, not to pry or anything.) I really liked it. *Likes* *Goes see more of your poetry :D )
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Rydia is the ruler of the world. :(




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Its about Unrequited love. Or loving someone who has no idea that you do, your just to scared to confront them about it, and sadly :( I write everything from personal experience. Thankyou for your review and your comments and your likes! They all mean so much. Feel free to tell me what you think of my other poetry. Thanks again!! :D




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Aww... That reminds me of me... Except for the fact that I don't write as awesome poetry and my poetry format is all messed up. I'm sorry that you feel hurt...
Please take care to use good grammar when making a post!

"grammer" 1519 matches on YWS *twitches*

Rydia is the ruler of the world. :(




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Your very kind. My poetry is so not amazing but thankyou for the amazing compliment. Its okay, I deal with my problems by writing them down, which is why I get so nervous when I post them, because they are very true to me. Thanks again!



One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World