guilded

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I can see that you're standing right in front of me.
Hands open, begging for answers.
And i concede, i'm looking for the same things too.

I'm talking about me and you in my head.
In my head, where happiness is a victory.
In my head, where you can walk for miles in a matter of minutes whithout a map to find your way.

You have such a pretty face
And your smile keeps me awake better than drugs.
And your way with words is lightyears beyond your age.

I'm handing out answers but they don't add up.
I'm asking questions i've never thought of before.
You are a winter wind running through my body, chilling my spine, stopping my heart. but you kept me alive so i can pump my face full of blood when you walk by.

You are the cat that caught my tongue and i hope you never let go
-zenjoy




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I find it is hard to review lyrics when you can't hear the beat they go along with, but I will do my best TT^TT

I really like this only thing is that
In my head, where you can walk for miles in a matter of minutes whithout a map to find your way


and
You are a winter wind running through my body, chilling my spine, stopping my heart. but you kept me alive so i can pump my face full of blood when you walk by.


seem to be too long for a song. Or are they broken up matching the beat??

T^T I love the words though ^_^
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