I wanted to thank people for giving me those pointers.I just wanted to say that if you wanted to know the rest of the story,it'll be under 'other'. Thank you.
Hello Antasea! Just so you know, these kind of updates don't go in the literary forums. If you would like to make a personal thank-you to those who critiqued you, feel free to PM them or send them a gift! You can keep people informed about your stories by posting in your blog or making a thread of your own in The Writers Corner.
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"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
