Moon Beams (a haiku)

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hippie_vampire
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Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:00 am
hippie_vampire says... · Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:00 am
Moon beams on misty
roads. Blossoms glow beneath the
light. The silence sings.
“There are many thing people have claimed can not be true and yet nearly all of them have ether been true to begin with or been made true by thous stubborn enough to ignore them.”-Scientist 666 from my 2009 NaNoWriMo novel.
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Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:12 am
danii says... · Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:12 am
It is so beautifully crafted, really captured the essence, I really enjoyed reading this (: :smt001
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Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:19 pm
xKelle_Bellex says... · Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:19 pm
Usually, I hate
Haikus. However, yours is
full of pulchritude.


I do really love the visual imagery in this one. It's so gentle, but for something in such a small space, it manages to give me goosebumps.

Well done.
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hippie_vampire
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Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:42 am
hippie_vampire says... · Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:42 am
xKelle_Bellex wrote:Usually, I hate
Haikus. However, yours is
full of pulchritude.


I do really love the visual imagery in this one. It's so gentle, but for something in such a small space, it manages to give me goosebumps.

Well done.


Aw thank you :mrgreen:
“There are many thing people have claimed can not be true and yet nearly all of them have ether been true to begin with or been made true by thous stubborn enough to ignore them.”-Scientist 666 from my 2009 NaNoWriMo novel.
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