Kill me

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*The vocalist begins to sing in a rap style
As the smoke,
The blood,
Covers your land
Try to grab my hand

*The vocalist is interrupted by a scream

Your going to fucking kill me!

*The vocalist continues to sing in a rap style
The corpse
The dead
Decorating everywhere
But lets make it fair

*The vocalist is interrupted by a scream

Your fucking killing me!
(You disarm me!)

This little kill is mine
Come on lets fight!
Were running out of time!

Your called a dog!
I’m called a pig!
There is no difference…
In war!!!


Your going fucking kill me!
You will try to kill me!
Can you do it?!
(Were about to fined out!)

*The vocalist continues to sing in a rap style
The smoke,
The rubble,
Covers your home.
The sea is covered in blood foam…

*The vocalist is interrupted by a scream

Your going to fucking kill me!

*The vocalist continues to sing in a rap style
Your brother jumps out
He gets blown away
How much dead, its time to count
Watching him, you cant stay….

*The vocalist is interrupted by a scream
Your going fucking kill me!

Here on the field were all the same
We got into this mess,
and who are we to blame?!

You are known as sergeant
I’m known as commander
There is no difference…
In war!!!

Your going fucking kill me!
You will try to kill me!
Can you do it?!
(Were about to fined out!)



*The vocalist goes on a screaming solo
Trust me!
Your going to try to fucking kill me
Kill me,
Kill me,
Kill fucking me!!!

You hit me in the face
(Kill me)
I dodge, trying to embrace
(Kill me)
You shoot in my chest
(Kill me)
But I run, stab you, (please be my guest)
(Kill me)
You bite my neck
(Kill me)

*whisper

But I slip,
We fall,
Down the hill,
Our mission is complete

*The screaming solo continues

You fucking kill me!
(I killed you)
You fucking kill me!
(I killed you)
You fucking kill me!
(I killed you)
You fucking kill me!
(I killed you!!!)

But we mean nothing
We are just another cow
Going in the slaughter house…
They killed us all!

They fucking killed!
They fucking killed all of us!!!

The bombs fall from the sky
The gods are looking from above
Waving us good bye!

The missiles!
The shit!
The food!
The death pit!

They fucking killed!
They killed all of us.
They fucking killed!
They killed all of us.
They fucking killed!
They killed all of us!!!

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Last edited by lordgluzman on Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:09 am, edited 2 times in total.
Blood is red
But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
And take you




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wow. this is amazing. so deep and it's just... wow. but it sounds weird when you put
As the smoke,
The blood,
Covers your land
Try to grab my hand


It sunds dodgy capitalizing all those bits, i can't explain in... but... it might just be me but it seems a bit cut off for a rapping style. like you're going to stutter every time you start the line.
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As the smoke,
The blood,
Covers your land

Try to grab my handIt sunds dodgy capitalizing all those bits, i can't explain in... but... it might just be me but it seems a bit cut off for a rapping style. like you're going to stutter every time you start the line.


Yea are rite it is rapping style. I understand if it sounds a bit confuseing.
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But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
And take you




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Hey, why don't you try to replace that rap style with quiet, but metal singing? You know - slowly, but "black" ...like in the beginning of "Dead skin mask" by Slayer (again those guys... :roll: ).
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HEY HEY HEY HEY!!!!

Long time, no talk.
Hey dude, you got skillz for hard core rockin'. It's deep and has passion in it.

But... :o why so dark?! It's gloomy. That's my only concern.

Again though, you have hard core rockin' skillz.
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