Bittersweet

BitterSweet

I wish you the candy mountain tops
throwing up in the clouds.

I wish the you heavens above
I wish you the depths of hell.

I wish you the joy and
I wish you the love
I wish you the pain I dwell.

Chorus:

I wish you sugar
In your sour Life
I wish you hatred and a bloody knife.
I wish serenity,for your aching pain
and destruction for the hope you gain
I wish you the the best I wish you The worst
I wish you the bittersweet.
I wish you the best I wish you the worst
I wish you the BitterSweet.

I wish you you the cloudiest storms
on your wedding day
I wish you were torn and broken apart
I wish that you were okay

I wish you were dead i wish you were gone
I wish that you would just leave
I wish you were here I wish you were here
I wish you were here with me.

Chorus:
I wish you sugar
In your sour Life
I wish you hatred and a bloody knife.
I wish serenity,for your aching pain
and destruction for the hope you gain
I wish you the the best I wish you The worst
I wish you the bittersweet.
I wish you the best I wish you the worst
I wish you the BitterSweet.

Oh I hate That
That i love you so
And the worst part
You completely know.
So I sit here
just thinking of you
If you think of me
BitterSweetly too.

Reprise:
Do you wish me sugar
In my sour Life
Do you wish me hatred and a bloody knife.
Do you wish serenity,for my aching pain
and destruction for the hope I gain
I wish you the the best I wish you The worst
I wish you the bittersweet.
You wish me the best I wish you the worst
I wish you the BitterSweet.
We're wishing the best We're wishing the worst
We're wishing the bitter sweet.

My Sour sweet and gone tell me
If you wish me Bittersweetly.

Very Good! I write songs too and this is pretty good! The first thing, though, that threw me off was your first line:

Amira15 wrote:I wish you the candy mountain tops
throwing up in the clouds.

It's quite jarring, actually, and not in a pleasant way... It's good to have a gripping beginning, but this is a bit stretched. The rest is pretty good, although the song idea has been used before, (James Taylor's "Bittersweet") so depending on the melody and rhythm, it may be a bit cliched.

Hope I Helped!

-KEK