Inspiration

Inspiration is a interesting concept.
There is no definite time or place where you can find it.
It's like a passing stranger,it comes and goes,sometimes when you don't even know you found it.It could just be a random thought,a whole inspirational works does not just materialize by itself.It needs more thought to grow. Although inspiration has no time or place where it can it be found,certain places can provoke such thoughts. The only thing that is certain is that when you find it, try with all your might to develop it because it can go just as fast as came, like a passing stranger. Inspiration is an interesting concept.

Hey,
I'm Sophie. I really enjoyed this, but there were a couple of things I thought could be improved.

Inspiration is a(n? To match your last sentence?) interesting concept.
There is no definite time or place where you can find it.
It's like a passing stranger (this is nice),it comes and goes,sometimes when you don't even know you found it.It could just be a random thought,a whole inspirational works (work?) does not just materialize by itself.It needs more thought to grow. Although inspiration has no time or place where it can it be found certain places can provoke such thoughts. The only thing that is certain is that when you find it, try with all your might to develop it because it can go just as fast as (it?) came, like a passing stranger. Inspiration is an interesting concept.

Overall, I like the idea, but the repetition does get a bit annoying to the reader. Maybe try rewriting with the same idea, just don't repeat things and give a little description of each individual point?

Hope I helped!
Sophie

I like it. Everything Sophie said was good ^^ except i like repetition. Easy to remember, hard to stop thinking about. It is nice though when you always have a space after commas. I might try and make it longer, because i guess repetition is nice but not if its half of the thing... its so true though! I know im not the only one who waited to long after being inspired and it slipped away...