Everyone's On To You

VERSE ONE:
you got your
stick of dynamite
your ace up your sleeve
ready for a good fight
has no one told you yet?
someone spilled
someone told
and your stories are getting old

PRE CHORUS:
your last years news
we say your name and they say "who?"

CHORUS:
'cause the rain stains
on your face
everyone can see where you've been crying
and maybe they don't know it when your lying
too many excuses
the ties are coming loose and
everybodys on to you

VERSE TWO:
now i know you may be concerned
by the information that everyone's learned but you
i have to say
that i love that look on your face
it suits you well

PRE CHORUS + CHORUS

BRIDGE:
and everyone and everybody was on hold
to listen to you
and what do you do?
you take the minutes like prisoners
i hope you know the mistake you've made.

PRE CHORUS + CHORUS

LAST LINE:
you thought you've won the fight ...

CHORUS:
'cause the rain stains
on your face
everyone can see where you've been crying
and maybe they don't know it when your lying
too many excuses
the ties are coming loose and
everybodys on to you

Wow, that was great! I love the chorus! I was actually singing along to it This is my favorite line! I called it! lol

It gives off good order...it was plenty great! Keep on writing,