I love the second verse! It's so beautiful! There is nothing that was wrong with this. I may be wrong, but it just touched my heart...in a way. Cool beans, ha ha. Nice job.
Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe~JT Lloyd