Rough Draft
In the town of Tokyo Japan, Akira and two little sisters Airi and Emi along with there mother lived in a small home on the far west of the city. Akiria was the oldest of the three sisters althoue she looked the yongest she was very small and weak but a very good gardener. Airi is the size of everyone her age is and she is very strong so she is able to help her sister with heavy things with her garden. And Emi is the smallest and she is just beginning to walk and learn how to talk so she is not able to help her sisters with much. The sister’s ages are sixteen, nine, and two, Akiria is the oldest and Airi is the middle sister. The three sisters live with their mother only because their father died a long time ago.
Emi was on the porch crawling around and trying to get her mother to learn how to crawl again and like always her mother would say “Baby you can’t teach an old dog new tricks no matter how hard you try” Emi never got what her mother meant when she said that so she would always keep on trying. Akiria came down onto the porch she was all dressed up hair died up in a bow and a long black dress flowing from all sides. “Akiria what are you doing in your graduation dress its not until next week?” her mother said quite confused “I am going to go enter the best garden contest since everyone already knows I have the best garden so I will surely win” “Akiria there is a chance you may not win you are a very talanted girl and the best one I have seen but there are chances there are other people out there better than me and you” Akiria’s mother has said as sweetly as she could. Akiria left the porch got in her car and drove off to go enter the contest even thou in her head she knew that her mother may be right.
The next morning Airi told her big sister akiria that she had found some chemicals that may help her garden grow faster and win the contest. “Airi how many times to I have to tell you japenese gardens are a tradition and are tradition has been to always win to show how peace and freedom is here that all we have to do is find it and let it out. Althou she sounded like she knew she didn’t. Mother came down in the kitchen singing something but no one knew what it was. “Japenese gardens are what make us live, without them we would have no where to look or to play. They are not for showing off but for showing peace and love so please my dear stop fooling you and forget about wining this contest fair and square. “Mommy what are you singing?’ “Well dear I am singing something I want youre sister to understand and usually singing helps her understand” my mother was very confident in what she had just said but I was still not quite shure what she had meant. Mother left the kitchen and on her way out dropped her diary emi beginning t just read opened the book and on the front cover it said “Emi my darling I promise I will teach you no matter how hard it is that you just cant teach an old dog new tricks no matter how hard you try.” –Love mom
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