Please, in need of reviews desperately.

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13timmy24
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:32 am
13timmy24 says... · Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:32 am
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Lately I've noticed a lot of my works haven't recieved much feedback, and few views.. I know I'm not a well known writer around here but I'd really like constructive criticism... I posted my latest work above, please check it out?




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Poor Imp
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:35 am
Poor Imp says... · Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:35 am
Oy, you might get a bit better known -- and a bit more help -- if you critiqued others. One tends to get treated in kind. Perhaps dash around reviewing, da?









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Mizzle
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:36 am
Mizzle says... · Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:36 am
Hey, Timmy. I'll review your work after I post this.
One tip: review other people's works more often, get yourself known. Chatting helps, actually.
Get out there!
Tata,
Mizz
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Because after all, those wings will take you up so high."
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Sureal
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:38 am
Sureal says... · Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:38 am
Not really the place to ask for reviews, I'm afraid. There's some good tips here, though.

Also, check out the Will Review For Food forum. =)



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