The Story of Picky Peak-a -Boo

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This is the story of Picky Peak-a-Boo
She won't eat for me nor you.
She won't eat anything brown,gray,white, or blue
even if you tell her to.
She won't eat fast nor slow
even if you promise her a play in the snow.
She won't eat no no no.
She won't even eat your homemade cookie dough.
She won't eat for me nor you even if you tell her to.
Salt in the air, blood in my veins, no more black clouds, just colorful days...




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Awh, cute! It sounds just like my cousins! Great job! :) "She won't even eat your homemade cookie dough" lol, she's insane! i love cookie dough! (my cooking of the cookie dough however..... yuck, I wouldn't blame her.)
This is an innocent poem but at the same time it has a deeper meaning, espeacilly fo rthe people who really refuse to eat anything at all. Cool poem, awesome job, keep writing! I'll be reading more of your stuff!

Peace
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~Jack Sparrow, At Worlds End




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Amazing, especially for the younger readers! A great poem too!!!! I love the rhyming though I write poems, I'm terrible w/ a capital T when trying to rhyme. Please look for my work.:)
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