War Planet

This story is about a far planet from earth that is all based on territory. What I will need if you want to join is what your characters name will be and what side he will be on. The sides are the Red Wings ( good guys (humans)and the forgers (bad guys that search and destroy villages that have food) (alien). One of the reasons why this battle began is because the forgers ran out of supplies and raided one of the villages of the humans. After news reached the Red Wing headquarters, war broke out. The commander of the Red Wings, Rex Wilson, sent all of the best soldiers to battle for territory of the planet. The characters in this story will be the soldiers of the armed forces. Choose your character and join.
Here are some rules.

> this story is PG-13 so no language

> you must state your character's name and what side he will be on.

> you must state your character's age, it must be teenager.

> state what your character looks like( physical appearance.)


> Please state your character's strengths and weakness.

Thank you and i hope that you join this fun adventure!!!!

Ahem, I would suggest giving an elephant more of information, seeing as how those things usually help bring in the crowds to your storybook. Perhaps, the territories of the Red Wings and Forgers? maybe the political situation? perhaps how they got to be enemies in the first place?
Anyways, you should give us some more resources to work on; I mean, I could come up with the setting, people and plot myself, but it's your story...

i hope i fixed it? if not i will add more

Lifey, hun, you need a bit more help. Just post an outline for the charrie profiles, and separate the plot and intro. If you need anymore help, or me to explain things, just pm me.

God idea, just keep working on it!


-Nutty

ok

Humanity was so consumed with hatred for one another that they destroyed their planet before the storybook even began.

THE END

Oh Aspiring Author, you meanie okay I'll join I guess:

Character Profile:

Name: Marcia Anotane

Age: 17

Role: Human Red Wings

Physical Description: Long Brown hair up to the bottom of her back, icy blue eyes, small nose, tall and thin

Strengths-Hand to Hand combat

Hope more people will join

Weakness-Blades

I ended this for a reason Jasmine, It was like on the last page.

oh really....i didn't know well nevermind then it seemed to be a rather boring idea anymore....very cliche