This is my first short story, and It is really short so viewers I'm sorry if it is hard to embrace the dramatic effect, anyway, please if you like it reply and if you dont reply some tips.
Man in the Mask
Emilia was a girl, living in the shady outskirts of a town called Traliatha, she worked the dirty job of a mining engineer, for her family was very poor and could not afford food, as she heard the sounds of the creatures scattering underground, she would think miserably of herself that she could be so much more. Over the days she would hear about a man who would walk around the town at night, sometimes during the hours of Emilias work, she was curious about him because, he would never reveal himself, and he would never do anything except walk....and walk. One day as Emilia walked to her station, something happened, she and the man suddenly became eye and eye. She got nervous thinking something would happen that was about to risk her life, and her family's, but the man just stood there, he seemed as though he was in a trance, remembering something vividly. The awkward silence ended when he started to walk away and leave her with a frightened expression on her face. Then he looked back and put something into her hand, it was a necklace, with a thread and a British coin as a charm. Strangely, the trinket seemed very familiar to her. As she made her way to the mine there was a soft noise coming from under ground, she ignored it, only to find our that mice had been digging through the mines, causing massive rocks to come tumbling down into the mines! Emilia was trapped, she was being hit with rocks on her head, she started have a terrible head ache and she as losing air fast, she yelled, "HELPPPP!!!!!!!!!! HELP! HE-...!" After her last shriek of distress, she had lost her breath, and she lied underneath the earth, no breath, no movement. Suddenly someone started shredding through the dirt to make their way to her, It was the man who she had seen. Finally as he found her hand, he gently took a hold of it, and at that exact moment, she opened her eyes and started moving again. He pulled her out of the area and carried her through the earth, she felt protected in his soft arms, she knew they would be ok. They got out of the mine and Emilia noticed the mans mask had been knocked off during the small avalanche of rocks. After he removed his hands from his dirt stained eyes, she suddenly had a memory. She was on a boat, and he friend was in the water, as she waved to him, he vigorisouly waved back, but then came a striking sound and the man was forced underwater. She jumped into the ocean and found that a shard of glass had been lunged through his heart, he was dead. Emilia started to cry and noticed a necklace, it was the same necklace the man gave her, it had fallin off while the shard was launched she put it around his body and sailed back to shore. " I have missed you Emilia!" he said, " Oh Robert," she ran over to him and hugged him " I have missed you so, Ive been without love for so long, how did you survive the shard launched into your heart?" she asked him. As they were hugging he pulled out a dagger and shoved it through her back. She screamed and went limp into his arms. As he set her liveless body down to the ground he said "I didn't survive it, and now you shall not either", as he walked away, slowly his body turned to a white color and faded away into the air.
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