Look Left: Preview 2, when Theo finds Tessie again.

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It was raining.
Jake was sprinting across the square towards the guildhall, so I slowed. I didn’t want to face the awkwardness of Phoebe and Jake in a wet, confined space, with almost no one else around. Phoebe ran ahead of me, to join Jake in the Guildhall; her usually wild red hair plastered to the back of her school jumper
I looked around to see if there was anyone else I knew in the almost deserted square. This was a small town, and even Daisy would be a more welcome sight than Phoebe and Jake, now. There was only one group of people in the square; I squinted through the rain. All I could see was their heights: tall, maybe my age or older, and the faces of those nearest to me.
Then I recognised him. And my heart stopped.
I stood in the rain, staring. I was unaware of my bag, as it fell to the wet concrete floor with a thump. I was unaware of my shirt, which was probably going see through in all the rain. I was unaware of Jake and Phoebe, half watching me from the shelter of the Guildhall, half watching each other. All I could see was Theo.
He was walking across the square, parallel to me. I could barely see him through the early morning mist, and the drizzling rain. He was with an indistinct group of people. They all looked vaguely familiar: I recognized Finn and Josh amongst them, their blonde hairstyles standing out amongst the sea of dark others. They were now reaching the other side of the square, and I could barely see them.
Without really deciding too, I picked up my phone. I scrolled down the contact list until I found the number I wanted, and I pressed call.
On the other side of the square, he picked up his phone.
I recognised the ring tone; it brought all those memories flooding back in such a rush I could barely stand. Times in Venice; riding through canals, hiding in Museums, and that awful moment in the changing rooms.
He picked up. At the end of the line; I heard his voice.
“Tessie?” His voice. I remembered it so well; I wanted to sob with relief. He was here; it was him; he had picked up the phone across the square, halting in his walk.
“Tess, are you there?”
And then I said it. I answered the question. I accepted the call. I told him where I really was and what I was doing. All in those two words that I would remember for the rest of my life.
“Look left.” My voice hitched on the last word.
He spun around in the square, and I saw his face. I dropped the phone, it didn’t matter anymore. At that moment, nothing mattered. I vaguely recollect Phoebe calling me, ‘Tess’, telling me something about the rain. I didn’t care.
We stood there for a whole minute, just staring. His friends had stopped further ahead, and were looking back. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Finn wave his hand, unsurely. It was so… so Finn that I almost had to laugh. I smiled at him. And then at Theo. His returning smile made my whole body seem to melt. And then I knew.
It didn’t matter how far away I kept myself from him, whatever I made him think, I loved Theo. I loved him with every ounce of love I was capable of holding in my body, and I was going to love him until I died. Quitting my gift, ignoring his, leaving my old friends, none of it had been helping me move on.
Suddenly he was beside me, smiling down at my face. He wiped a tear from my eye: it was black.
“I love you, Tess.” He whispered, his hand still resting on my cheek, “I love you.” Tears flowed freely down both of our faces now. He took me in his arms, holding me fiercely, tightly, as if never to let go. I never wanted him too. I love you, I whispered again and again into his chest. It was as if there had been a hole inside me, no, not a hole, a huge great abyss, filled with black thoughts and desperate feelings, and only now was it starting to fade. I could feel in myself, the strength returning, my mind clearing, sharpening, my memory being reborn, and my heart tripling in size. I could see, once more, as if from an outsider’s view, the situation I had been in.
After what seemed like ages, he let go, and held me at arms length.
“What happened?” he asked, “I thought I lost you. You never answered my calls. I called Annie and Chee and Milo and everyone else I could remember; and none of them knew where you had gone. Who were you with just now?”
“Phoebe. And Jake.” I remembered. They seemed distant now. Their moral friendships had never really replaced the deep, meaningful ties I shared with Annie, Chee, Milo, Harry, Lilly, Lu, and Pixie. I missed Pixie so much.
“Why?” he asked, and I knew instantaneously the question he was asking. And for the first time since I had left my old life as Tessie; and become Tess, I knew the answer to the question, ‘Why?’
“Because I loved you.”
And apparently, that was all I needed to say.
“I love you, too.” I hadn’t realised how empty his eyes were, until that look vanished, to be replaced by a burning, constricting fire. I knew, then, that his gift had been absent from him as long as mine had been from me.
He kissed me.
It was like standing behind Nevada Falls again. I could almost feel the rush of water beside us, the stone beneath our feet, the excitement and danger as he kissed me so fiercely, within reach of such power.
The kiss lasted for several minutes; and then he pulled back. He looked at me with an apologetic expression.
“What?” I asked, impatiently.
“I singed your hair a little.” He fingered a strand, “And you dyed it.” His mouth turned down.
“I didn’t.” I said, solemn as ever, and he understood the incredible effects that losing my power had had on me. He opened his mouth.
“Don’t say it.” I put a finger on his lips. He wasn’t apologising to me ever again.
I am not talking about the person you would die for. I am talking about to the person you would live for.

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i was almost crying when i read that, have you written all the rest of this yet> just not posted it? cuz i soo wanna read it, But in the last bit, you said she had changed her number to stop him calling her. so how did he know it was her when he picked up the phone? but anyway. loved it loved it loved it.

i love the name theo soo much lol xx
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Trying to make the other side?
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Because...um...i dont know actually :) good point

And actually, all i have written is from this point onwards and you need to read the first part (which i havent written yet) to understand most of it. Hopefully i'll be done soon...keep posting stuff so i can get my review count up :)

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Ella you smella you really have to post the rest of this soon as you finish it :/ or before!

i need to know what happens lol!
yeah

'He was walking across the square, parallel to me. I could barely see him through the early morning mist, and the drizzling rain. He was with an indistinct group of people.'
I don't know why but I like that sentence!

Suddenly he was beside me, smiling down at my face. He wiped a tear from my eye: it was black.
“I love you, Tess.” He whispered, his hand still resting on my cheek, “I love you.” Tears flowed freely down both of our faces now. He took me in his arms, holding me fiercely, tightly, as if never to let go. I never wanted him too. I love you, I whispered again and again into his chest. It was as if there had been a hole inside me, no, not a hole, a huge great abyss, filled with black thoughts and desperate feelings, and only now was it starting to fade. I could feel in myself, the strength returning, my mind clearing, sharpening, my memory being reborn, and my heart tripling in size. I could see, once more, as if from an outsider’s view, the situation I had been in.

and that the bit which makes me want to cry every time I read it! bad ella...
Ever seen a blind man cross the road
Trying to make the other side?
Ever seen a young girl growing old
Trying to make herself a bride? - Handbags and gladrags




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although i have no clue whats going on, ( the hair burned, and the change in color0 i still apresiated the work dearly. be being new to this whole site i didn't expect to find such amazing pieces. this is amazing. thank you for opening my eyes and please notifie me when you write you next chapter!




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Thankyou!! I will write more as soon as it comes to me... most of this just happens in my head :L

and Beth: Patience :)

Ella
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I am not talking about the person you would die for. I am talking about to the person you would live for.

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When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov