Dead Memories

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They're all i have,
All I need.
It's not much,
But I don't mind the pain & grief.
They seem like nothing,
Yet their the world to me.
I keep them safe,
and think of them each night.
I know I should delete them,
But I shall not.
'Cause they're all I have left of him,
Even though, they are dead memories.
Last edited by XxEliZ4B3thxX on Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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I really like this poem. Actually the title made me come to read it. There's always a title that makes me come to do. In the future, I hope to read more of your poetry.
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It's not a bad poem, the title is eye catching. Can't wait to read more




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ehh its short...thers a lot to be said about the idea though...we often find outsleves with memories that we don't like..i myself and very much so haunted by many memories... lol...good poem...
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Okay, well I need to know, is the relationship dead or is he dead? I'm not sure with how the ending goes. It has a relatable topic(because we all have our secret memories) and that is good, but you need to expand on the relationship abit more. I hope you can use this if you want.

Keep writing!!!
Teddy
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural



He who has a why to live for can bear with almost any how.
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