Too Late-8/31/09

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Every time I see her face,
I want to punch a wall,
I want to harm, to hurt, and bleed and
make her suffer more.

I want her to feel the betrayal,
feel the hot sting of burning metal on her skin,
hear her screaming for it to stop because
she finally understands the pain.

I want to see the look in her eyes,
knowing that when we graduate we will not see each other again,
knowing that her control over me is gone,
and that I can finally live my life.

But until that time I want her to suffer,
to feel her own life leaving her body,
to slowly suffocate on the shit she spews from her mouth,
to die knowing that I am finally free of her.

I want her death to be drawn out,
I want her to feel each wound afresh,
I keep hoping, praying, plotting, and waiting,
waiting for that opportunity that I know will never come.

She is already dead to me.
Silence is a friend who will never betray -- Confucius

Death only comes to those who have truly Fallen --Anonymous




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wow, this wants to make me punch my hypocritical coward even more!!

I could just be predjudiced because i can relate to this topic, but I think this piece was very well composed and an authentic display of emotion.
~C.N.

"Out here, I believe in everything. Every leaf, every flower. Birds, the air. Just a feeling that I cannot explain."Green Mansions(1959)




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I agree with Cnvalambrosia on this one, that was pretty damn amazing.

I haven't felt such an emotion from the internet in a long time.

Keep it up :D
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