**I'm introducing a new character to this chapter tell me what you think**
Chapter two
The ice pack felt cool against my head. A fresh headache started behind my left eye. It had been difficult to explain to humans how I survived a seventy foot fall by only escaping with a bruised forehead. I sat in Killian's living room, not regretting anything but that bloody fall. I'd hit my head on a Taxi's review mirror and the mirror had more damage to it than I did.
"Why don't you just marry him? Get it over with." Killian was one of the tallest humans I've ever seen, but that was the problem... Killian wasn't human. Not really he was an Antilegendan. An Antilegendan is a man born from demons but turned into a angel to walk Earth no longer did they have a place in Heaven or Hell and vice verse, they looked out for people or they killed them. Killian had dark blond waves that reached the top of his ears. His eyes and skin changed colors depending on mood. On the surface he was every women's' fantasy, he looked like some Greek God. Still, Killian wasn't perfect. He had emotional issues that he liked to take out on things that weren't breathing.
I glared at him, I wanted to point out my reasons but Killian was a guy and he just wouldn't get it even as much as I trusted him.
"I'm not going to marry Wesley because I don't know him that well but what I do know is his family's reputation which isn't good." I started. Wesley wanted what humans had except he wanted to kill every human he saw. His hatred for them confused me and made me angry. Wesley had proposed to me once when I was pledging and I'd turned him down because we'd never even met. Wesley had just proposed out of the blue.
"I'm not going to marry him, Killian." I repeated then added."I want something different then him." The ice pack had already started to turn to warm water, I got up and walked into Killian's damaged kitchen, like I said, Killian had emotional riots every now and then it all came with being a Antilegendan.
Killian's eyes turned from a beautiful emerald to jet black. Even after
two-hundred years I still wasn't use to it. "You want something different. Would that mean you want a human, Hell?"
This time it was my turn to looked offended. I went into the pantry and threw away the bag. I looked around. "You know you never have any food in here, but yet you have plates and a garbage" I planted my hands on my hips and looked at the bare shelves. I felt sorry for Killian, but I knew he didn't want anyone's pity or comfort. Anitlegendan's were all males, don't ask me why. They never ate, because if they did their body would release a chemical that attracted female humans.
"You didn't answer my question. Do you want a human?" His eyes were still that scary jet black.
I tried to keep a low profile on my emotions. The last thing I needed was to have my emotions running around controlling me.
"Killian, I'm not looking for love. I don't want to get married right now. And I sure as hell don't want to start hatching some leaches baby."
He cocked his head, maybe he was good at listening.
"What happens when Wesley comes back? You do know that he will have a bounty on you... At least his family will."
"Well then they'll know where to find me. Thanks for the help Kill." Before he could even utter a word I walked out the door. I damn well could go for a drink just about now.
Thanks for Reading
-Max!

read the chapter and loved it!
But the only problem I have with this chapter its that its too short. I wanted to read more! The only suggestion I'm going to give to you is that you should make your chapters longer. You have a great story, make it longer.
