Psycho B****

PSYCHO BITCH

Uh-oh, oh no
Here she comes strutting in
She thinks she’s all that
When honestly, she’s lower than dirt

Uh-oh, oh no
Get out of her way
Or she’ll trap you in her smirking
And you’ll feel pity for her

Chorus:
So here she comes, the psycho bitch
Ain’t she such a green-skinned witch
She’s so outlandish, do you care
Can you talk to her, do you dare
Dressed in plaids and flowers
With rain boots, can she get any lower
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, the psycho bitch

Uh-oh, oh no no
Dignity isn’t in her mind
It’s all about being her
When, honestly, she’s a mess

Uh-oh, no no no no
It’s sad to see our generation
So pitiful and weak
But she thinks she’s got survival skills

Chorus:
So here she comes, the psycho bitch
Ain’t she such a green-skinned witch
She’s so outlandish, do you care
Can you talk to her, do you dare
Dressed in plaids and flowers
With rain boots, can she get any lower
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, the psycho bitch

Bridge:
And she thinks she’s fine
When she should be locked up
Just thinks she’s all right
When she doesn’t belong anywhere
When she don’t be civilized

Uh-oh, oh no
Uh-oh, oh no
Uh-oh, my, my, my, my

Chorus:
So here she comes, the psycho bitch
Ain’t she such a green-skinned witch
She’s so outlandish, do you care
Can you talk to her, do you dare
Dressed in plaids and flowers
With rain boots, can she get any lower
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, here she comes (warning)

Chorus:
So here she comes, the psycho bitch
Ain’t she such a green-skinned witch
She’s so outlandish, do you care
Can you talk to her, do you dare
Dressed in plaids and flowers
With rain boots, can she get any lower
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, my oh my, oh my, oh my
Here she comes, the psycho bitch

Uh-oh, oh no
Uh-oh, oh no
Uh-oh, oh no
Here she comes strutting in

Alright.

This poem does seem to be a very.. Vent-ish sort of thing. I can really feel raw, unbridled emotion rolling off of it. I can hear rock in the background more than pop when it comes to this lyrical.

I really like this, it's different than your other things. Keep at it.


I rate this a 9 out of 10, only because the 'oh no' and "uh uh, my' annoys me just a little bit. But that is just my personal preference.

Hellow!
I agree with xKelle_Bellex. The song's packed to the brim with bitter emotion.
It's very amusing, like a parody. But as a serious song, not so much. What did you intend it to be?

Alright, well, this is a very bitter song. It's verging on cranky-old-man bitter at certain points.
The intention/viewpoint in this piece is rather scattered and unclear. It seems to switch around randomly, making reading it almost like being forced to experience mood swings.
At certain points, I felt almost sympathetic towards the girl character, the "psycho bitch." While at the angry points, it just felt like someone yelling at me for something I don't even know anything about. Almost like I'm being vented at and then suddenly sympathizing with this person the narrator's so bitter towards.

This song was good, but could use a lot of work, from creating a clear opinion and expressing that in an engaging way to the actual wording.
PM me with any questions. I'd love to help.

-Jocelyn.