Being four

The world is an oyster
I am the pearl
A naive pearl
A perky pearl
I can get my way
or go with the flow
I will bend
or swoop
and snap
a fluffy toy
a woven blanket
praise
and warm milk
is what I desire
I am four

So, um, not really feeling this. It's good and has a good concept, but it could be better, a lot better.

The world is an oyster
I am the pearl
A naive pearl

This is good, I don't like, but I'm not a fan of this kind of poetry. But, thus far, I wouldn't change it.

A perky pearl

I don't really like this at all. It doesn't fit, even the alliteration isn't feeling right.

I can get my way
or go with the flow
I will bend
or swoop
and snap

This doesn't feel right at all to me, like, it doesn't fit at all. You've got this whole thing about a child is precious, like a pearl and then that sends a smooth image to me. But bend, swoop, and snap sound very harsh. Plus, I don't really get what you're saying.

a fluffy toy
a woven blanket
praise
and warm milk

Well, this isn't good or bad, it just is.

is what I desire
I am four

Meh. That's how I feel this ending is...meh. I wish I could be more descriptive but that's all that I feel...

It's very good, i enjoyed it. very powerful.