Why I love Twilight

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I've had a lot of people ask my why I love Twilight. Now I have a reason.

The answer is not very complicated, but I thought I would tell it in the form of a story. If you want to read it, go ahead, because it's a pretty good story.

School was pretty boring for me. I didn't really have any friends in any of my classes, so the only points of reason for me to be here were; 1) To learn, and 2) Lunch and bus with friends. Why in the world did my locker have to be in the eighth grade hallway when I was in seventh? I made my way to the long expansion of darkness where the people who totally zoomed out had their lockers, too. Something caught my eye, and I turned my head. It was a girl. I hadn't seen her before, and I didn't even know who she was, but something about her was intresting. I made a mental note of the split second I saw her, prepared to look for her again.

Unconsiously, I again made my way for my locker after Spanish. Something like a buzzer put my on edge, and I realised I was again looking for the girl. Now, I wasn't stalking her, but something was pulling me toward her, in my mind, and I had to figure out what it was so I could get on with my life. Right then and there, she came into my line of sight, and I imediantly saw what it was about her. Her face was average, but there was it was, right there, plain as the nose on her face, that made her pretty. It was her smile.

You could tell this girl had alot of friends, but that she wasn't one of those girls who wanted everything and more than what the world had. I could tell she already had eveything she wanted, and her face glowed like a beacon to every one else. "Look here!" It said, "This is the thing that fullfills your life!" And everyone could tell why she was smiling. The girls' hands were entangled in another pair, and the smile planted on his face was, too, truly genuine. Both their eyes were filled with love, and I knew the secret to life, how to make it really perfect, and why Twilight filled that hole in a lot of girl's hearts. It was love.

You see, in Twilight, every girl can find the love that Edward gives Bella, and that is what really makes it special. Every girl can be loved within that book, and it gives every girl some where to go when they are sad. So, guys, now you understand what is so special about it. Every girl wants to be loved, and every girl will wait until their Edward comes. So, if your some shallow jerk, don't expect to give or get any love. And that, my dears, is why I love Twilight.




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First off, I want to say welcome to YWS.

I'm Angel of Death but please, call me Angel.

Well, I want to say that I am a Twilight fan as well. I've read the book like twenty times and though some people say it's written horribly and all the other things people say, I love Twilight because Bella isn't perfect and I can see me in her. The characters are believable and throughout the whole series it shows that love has it's ups and downs but it still works.

It's nice to meet you and I'm glad YWS has another Twilight fan. ^_^

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star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
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Hi, cjscoot! Welcome to YWS and just to let you know since you've posted something you should go do two reviews, that's supposed to be like a rule. XD

Now, for the review...


School was pretty boring for me. I didn't really have any friends in any of my classes, so the only points of reason for me to be here were; 1) To learn, and 2) Lunch and bus with friends. Why in the world did my locker have to be in the eighth grade hallway when I was in seventh? I made my way to the long expansion of darkness where the people who totally zoomed out had their lockers, too. Something caught my eye, and I turned my head. It was a girl. I hadn't seen her before, and I didn't even know who she was, but something about her was [s]intresting[/s] interesting. I made a mental note of the split second I saw her, prepared to look for her again.

[s]Unconsiously[/s] Unconsciously, I again made my way for my locker after Spanish. Something like a buzzer put my on edge, and I [s]realised[/s] realized I was again looking for the girl. [s]Now[/s] No, I wasn't stalking her, but something was pulling me toward her, in my mind, and I had to figure out what it was so I could get on with my life. Right then and there, she came into my line of sight, and I [s]imediantly[/s] immediately saw what it was about her. Her face was average, but there was it was, right there, plain as the nose on her face, that made her pretty. It was her smile.

You could tell this girl had [s]alot[/s] a lot of friends, but that she wasn't one of those girls who wanted everything and more than what the world had. I could tell she already had [s]eveything[/s] everything she wanted, and her face glowed like a beacon to every one else. "Look here!" It said, "This is the thing that [s]fullfills[/s] fulfills your life!" And everyone could tell why she was smiling. The girls' hands were entangled in another pair, and the smile planted on his face was, too, truly genuine. Both their eyes were filled with love, and I knew the secret to life, how to make it really perfect, and why Twilight filled that hole in a lot of girl's hearts. It was love.

You see, in Twilight, every girl can find the love that Edward gives Bella, and that is what really makes it special. Every girl can be loved within that book, and it gives every girl some where to go when they are sad. So, guys, now you understand what is so special about it. Every girl wants to be loved, and every girl will wait until their Edward comes. So, if [s]your[/s] you're/you are some shallow jerk, don't expect to give or get any love. And that, my dears, is why I love Twilight.


First of all the spelling mistakes are minor(Sorry, but I have OCD when it comes to spelling) and you had one problem somewhere in there with a plural form of a word, but don't really worry about that.

My opinion is that I don't really like Twilight and I see it as Edward Cullen being something that gets girls' hopes up about finding someone like him when the chance of that is about one in a million. Bella whines a lot to and it got on my nerves throughout reading the books. It just didn't appeal to my tastes. But, everyone has their opinions.

Over all, good job! :D

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Overall, it was great! But a lot of grammar mistakes! Consider looking it over, do you use Microsoft word?

On another note, I know pretty much nothing about the twilight series, just that it has to do with vampires and that girls go completely bonkers over Edward Cullen. Personally it doesn't bother me, I've longed for fictional characters too, that's what makes writing and film so magical! But I'd just like to say, not only girls feel this longing for.. perfect affection? Yeah, I'll put it that way. I feel that same way, I wish i had that, perfect person. She doesn't have to be the belle of the ball, as long as every time i see her my heart sinks deep.. :cry:
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Hey there, cjscoot! Welcome to YWS!
First of all, I don't want to sound like a pain in the ass, but I would like to remind you of 2:1 ratio. That means that for every work of yours you post, you should do two reviews to someone else. Now, let's go into your work!

Dear, I found this very... inspiring. I haven't deal with anti.twilight people outside of YWS, since where I am, everyone loves Twilight. Anyway, this was a good read, even with all the grammar mistakes (please correct them).
I just have one thing to point out: you contradict yourself on the third paragraph. Yous say you didn't had any friends, but then your second reason for going to school is lunch with friends. That makes this confusing.

I really appreciate your explanation for liking Twilight so much. I think that may be my reason, also.

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I can understand the imperfection part; finding yourself in Bella. But I know I would have resented it or just would have stopped reading it at book 2 chapter 3 if I had not already found my Edward, (seriously, he thinks he is, its really freakish lol). I'm glad for that and that I read the whole series. I loved it. Usually I'm not too fond of fiction and romance, especially not things that have to do with vampires; totally cliche. But on the contrary, it presented the whole theme of vampires in a way that made them totally, new. Which is
exactly why for two weeks, I constantly had one the Twilight books in front of my nose;
frantically turning the next page in anticipation.
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