Love came here to stay

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Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,

can you feel it on your heart,
It's knocking so, so ,so, so hard,
Your heart is,
bounding harder that the winds,

Loose the hate and agony,
replace it with sincerity,
how luxurious love can be,
when pain is not here to see,
the happiness,
the greatness,
the power of love is here,
it can't break away,
the love is here to stay.


Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,


maybe someday again,
we'll hear our hearts bounding in the wind,
oh baby,
someday again,

cuddle next to me,
in the darkest night,
kiss me on the lips,
and say good night,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,

till death makes us fall apart,
you'll be so close to my heart,

see me looking in your eyes,
you'll see the feelings of mine,
I'd come looking for you in the night,
I would even get you the moon from the sky.

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,
Last edited by Lord Anzius on Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:53 am, edited 1 time in total.
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This son is really good for your first lyrics! I think it needs like a guitar solo or a piano solo or
something but other than that i think it is pretty good! How do winds bound though? I don't get that.
I also think it can use just a little more work. You know, just play with the words some more.
GOOD JOB THOUGH!




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I have the chords ready for it. I have played it on the guitar. I just can't remember the names of the chords I play.... I just play.....



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:D Hey I like it a lot this is good

Cant wait to read your other lyrics in the future :D




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Your songs are getting sexyer and sexyer. I liked evrything but I think it is more like a poem maybe you should move it to another catogary. But is one of the best romantic writeings I read on this website.
pretty good. :D
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I like the song. Will you play it in the gala? :wink: A little repetitive in the love will never go away parts so if you add just a little variety in them would you
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This is so beautifully written 'I'm Lovin' it!'.tell me one thing as you told us, chords are ready.I want to know first you wrote song or first you prepared chords.you inspire for for writing song.

All the best for future composition
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Anssi...I really hate songs like this they bore me to the death:D the lyrics were good but i hate the "ooh"s and "oh baby"s like this:
Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,


I really think you should toss those away...their really corny, you make the song sound like its written by justin timberlake and alicia keys, just dont work

Liked most of it though=)
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I think you should do something with the chorus,
But it’s right; I like your song, but not really all,
That part of “ooh baby! ooh! I thing it need some changes.

From my point of view, this would be what I had wrote here if this was my song

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
I’m feeling on strange ways
that it’ll never fade away

Or “I’m not the one as yesterday”
I don’t know, it’s your song
You’re 14, you’ll be doing great.
You’ll have much experience trough time

(Sorry for my bad English. I’m Mexican)



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