'Top Of The World'

I really like these ones.

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Verse One:

The sun is shining outside
The rain can’t fall, even if it tried
The road’s paved in silver
And the smiles are made of glitter
Yeah

Chorus:

I’m on top of the world
And I love it, this feeling
I don’t want to fall down
Back to the cold ground
I’m on top of the world
Top of the world

Verse Two:

People are dancing around
They’re making the building pound
The music is playing loudly
And the stars are shooting freely
Yeah

Chorus:

I’m on top of the world
And I love it, this feeling
I don’t want to fall down
Back to the cold ground
I’m on top of the world
Top of the world

Bridge:

Top of the world
Top of the world
Hey
Top of the world
Top of the world
Hey
Top of the world
Top of the world
Hey

Chorus:

I’m on top of the world
And I love it, this feeling
I don’t want to fall down
Back to the cold ground
I’m on top of the world
Top of the world

It was simple, and fun to read. I'm sure it sounds better when there's music playing to it, too.

Besides that, there is only one thing that I would consider fixing if I were you, and that is the final line in Stanza/verse 2/whatever it is about stars shooting freely. It doesn't fit in that particular part, and I think it just seems to come from nowhere. If you fix that, otherwise this is pretty nice and well-done.

Hey - me again =]

This one's really good too! I wish I could write lyrics as good as this

The road’s paved in silver
And the smiles are made of glitter - I love these lines! It's just so happy and positive =]

These lyrics are catchy and I reckon it would sound great with music too...I started humming my own made up tune to match the lyrics

I do agree with 'Krupp' though, in that the last line of the second verse doesn't really seem to fit. Other than that I think you've done a great job!

xDudettex