Hi, guys! I'm writing a short film called "Old Love". I've already shown it to one friend who also dabbles in writing and he likes it a lot. Constructive criticism welcome.
I like the idea, I'm curios as to what the link is.
I think it would be better if you copy and pasted into a post though, instead of a link to another site, it makes things that little big easier. And there's a rule about posting two reviews before your own material.
