Always Remember Me

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====Rules====
>Write your profile
>Anyone may continue the character you created
>Please choose a character from the list below
>If you want to create a whole new character of your own, choose where he/she lives and the background of the character as well

Characters
>Calixte - Pixie (taken)
>Vail - human, but adopted by an Elf; Calixte's boyfriend
>Celest - Calixte's sister
>Ava - Gypsy;Vail's ex and tries to seduce Vail all the time
>Malia - Witch;Friend of Ava
>Hakka - Hippogriff; Friend of Calixte's father
>Cairo - Hunter ; "Friend" of Calixte [you'll get to decide if he betrays her of is trying to woo her]
>Knox - Pixie ;
>Gerome - Gnome ;
>Varvatos - Gypsie ;
>Onyx - Ogre

Different Towns and Who Live in Them (the entire planet is called Frana)

>Pixies live in Pixanator
>Elves live in Elvinia
>Gypsies live in Gypsian
>Witches live in Wiccan
>Fayries live in Fayrilian
>Hippogriffs live in Griffin
>Hunters live in Huntasia
>Ogres live in Orgarian
>Gnomes live in Gnomin

Some Info on the story
>Pixies have wings which change colour and position according to their mood. (Eg. sad -> blue, tilting down. happy -> orange, totally up)
>All creatures except for Hippogriffs, Hunters, Ogres and Gnomes are the size of normal humans.
>Ogres are the largest creatures of all, followed by Hunters and Hippogriffs, which are the same size.
>Orgres have slimy scales
>Hunters are life Hippogriffs, but the have a long spear (about 1 meter) at its forehead
>Only Hippogriffs can fly
> The creatures are vegetarians except for Hunters, Ogres and Gnomes. Vegetarians live double the life of humans as they eat a special type of vegetable, Caden Grass, as a living.

>Calixte is able to fly as her dad was a Hippogriff
>Hippogriffs usually work to transport people from Frana to Earth, vice cersa. It is expensive to rid a Hippogriff.
>Celest cannot fly
> Calixte's father died while flying to Earth one night
>Witches are able to use potions to diguise themselves as other creature or create wings, but these changes are all only temporarily, and a spell lasts longest 2 days (48 hours)

Write your like this one here
Name: Calixte
Home: Pixanator
Age: 18
Relationshipsfriends don't count: Vail's girlfriend ; Celest's Sister
Personality: Very bubbly. May be shy around strangers sometimes.

Physical appearance: Black long hair (not as long as up to the waist), Skin fairly fair, black eyes, sharp pointed ears, large pair of wings, Orangey Lips, Double eye lids, rather thin

Background: Mother already died when she was 17, and her father died while transporting some ogres (too heavy) to Earth one night.
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Last edited by Zyth on Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Nice beginning. But this wouldn't really be the place to put it. I understand your motives but look at the other storybooks. Also read some of the storybook rules and such posted on the front page of the storybooks.

Something like this would go in Action/ Adventure or the other story literature catagories. Romance perhaps.

When you post it there you could ask for help finishing it off.

PM me if you have any further questions!

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