In the daylight.

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What happens now, when I fall?
You said you would catch me
But now I see clearly
This claim was conditionally
Made.

It's alright, I suppose.
I can hide away my fears
And try to suppress my tears
Replace them with false cheers
Of joy.

Is it this feeling that unendingly nags?
Each day that passes
I see different facets
Of the ignorant masses
And sigh.

You can tear but you are so wrong.
I will stay and I will stand strong.
At least I will appear that way.

I can cover my regret.
But I cannot soon forget.
I just hide the memories in the day
light.

In the daylight.
In the daylight.

In the daylight it's easy to pretend.
That everything is okay --
That it's all going my way.
But the darkness will betray
Truth.

Oh please.
My life is blessed and has been since dawn.
But this hole detracts from moving on.
I need my loose ends tied up and repaired.
This silence and ice isn't fair.

In the daylight.
In the daylight.

This frigid ice glitters with a thousand different ribbons of rainbows and gold.

In the daylight.
In the daylight.

This hole seems no more than a bleak bitter trap to behold.
But it's deeper in twilight.
It's darker in the night.
I'm afraid.




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That was really good. I like the rhyming in the beginning and mid sections the most. It is excellent work =]
"Ars longa, vita brevis" - Hippocrates



There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy.
— William Shakespeare