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Just The Way I Like It

God · 2008-12-15T15:04:45Z

I like my poems with random verse. It cannot sound much worse than to hear those stupid fools with all their myriad rules. Trying to make me write with "skill" and me, I think I've had my fill of their critiques, their nonsense words. I think I may have actually preferred them not to mark my things at all, but rather, they've all had the gall to tell me how to live my life. I'd rather cut, with razor knife my very soul, than to make my image fit what they themselves will never admit has no personality, no style, no class. On their ideas, I'd rather pass. But for those, who'd like to speak for my reviews, it's you I'd seek, to not judge the Way, but rather the Why. Who'd rather live, and rather try than to follow rules so blindly. So please, very kindly, dont touch my stories, or my visions, and let me make my own decisions. Come sit a spell, and weave your tale just to let you know, im not for sale my work is always my own If you've nothing worth saying, leave it alone. Come, and sit for a spell, the others to hell. I'd love to hear your voice but i'm afraid I've got no choice. So goodbye, my unknown audience never forget to listen, in the silence for the miracles that work in the dark and light those brilliant sparks. Of ideas, and dreams, never crushed and masterpieces never rushed.

danielle_that_girl15

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Tue Jan 13, 2009 12:01 am

danielle_that_girl15 says... · Tue Jan 13, 2009 12:01 am

I love the way that the poem talks about things that happen to the youth every day at this very time. It conects and shows that life isn't fair, and that some learn that way to young.

Keep up the Great work

- Danielle

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Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot

Just The Way I Like It

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