Its A Short Piece Concerning What You May Think It Does;

it has no end no beginning, a lyric for the soul from the soul and not for the heart of man .wherever it begins that's where it may end and so the beginning of this might just be the end of this piece.
your phone might be still but mijn heart is not at rest even with my inner-self.
i want to post that letter that my heart speaks but my lips stagger when they begin that speech concerning a lyric of of my soul that is bonded with yours though we are one and cant be more .
this piece may not rhyme but i wrote it not with my mind but that heart and soul that speaks of my heart to you .
words like i love you i my not utter
but sure my actions never stagger .
the skies are blue my soul isn't .and if it may have i only think of roses. colours that only speak and talk of love freedom caring giving taking and providing when needed.
i didn't compose this for you but for me and my soul.
its not to flatter nor impress
its purpose is to set a man's soul free.
free from what ?
from everything and anything that does not in-slave him to her or him however it may be.
its not just a piece its one from ...............

my intention is not to look nor search for an end or the right finishing
for we this is life and when it begins there is no more beginning nor ending
this one lucked and so the sheet remains unmarked but the soul is filled with those hidden missing words.
or maybe there were never none
i guess we would never know
......................

xxviii x mm vii.....no its doesn't deserve this.was this planted before this sign or even after.......

Alright here it goes.

1) Grammar

Wow. The way you have this is very confusing. There are no sentences or capital letters where they should be. It's just like a train-wreck in the middle of the page to be blunt.

I fixed it to the extent of line changes and capital letters. I bolded the changes.

It has no end no beginning,
a lyric for the soul from the soul and not for the heart of man.
Wherever it begins that's where it may end,
and so the beginning of this might just be the end of this piece.
Your phone might be still,
but my heart is not at rest even with my inner-self.
I want to post that letter that my heart speaks,
but my lips stagger when they begin that speech
concerning a lyric of my soul that is bonded with yours,
though we are one and can't be more.
This piece may not rhyme,
but I wrote it not with my mind,
but that heart and soul that speaks of my heart to you.
Words like "I love you" I my not utter,
but sure my actions never stagger.
The skies are blue my soul isn't,
and if it may have i only think of roses.
Colours that only speak and talk of love, freedom,
caring, giving, taking, and providing when needed.
I didn't compose this for you but for me and my soul.
It's not to flatter nor impress.
It's purpose is to set a man's soul free.
Free from what?
From everything and anything that does not in-slave him to her or her to him
however it may be.
It's not just a piece
It's one from my intention is not to look
nor search for an end or the right finishing.
For we this is life
and when it begins there is no more beginning nor ending.
This one lucked
and so the sheet remains unmarked
but the soul is filled with those hidden missing words.
Or maybe there were never none.
I guess we would never know.
No, it doesn't deserve this.
Was this planted before this sign or after?

2) The writing itself

It's very confusing and I'm not sure what it's about really. That quote thing took forever, though.

3) What it could be

Your work is interesting. It's very deep and with a little work and editing stages it could be awesome.


If you are confused or want any help PM me.

~jumper

Hullo! I think moon jumper covered the important things, like grammar. I actually just read her corrected version instead of your grammarless one, which was a lot less confusing. Thanks jumper . Anyway, you do have an interesting style here, but I think you should form it into more of a poem-it seems to fit that best. That means having fun with line breaks! You seem to have divided your piece up into lines already, but some of the lines are a little long, so consider breaking them up. Re-read and edit a bit and I think you could have an amazing work.
xxxxx
PM me if you need any more help!