A little thing

Hey, I dont no where to put this or what to call it. reviews are needed.

How am I meant to feel when I see you?
Knowing you know,
That I’m obsessed over you,
That I can’t keep my eyes off you,
Every time you walk by I skip a heartbeat,
Every time you hold you hold me in your arms and tell me that I’m a great friend.

I watch your pure blue eyes,
Watch you speak with those soft lips,
Whilst you hang around with them friends,
The friends that treat you like shit.
Like you’re just a toy for them to play with.

Why did you let her treat you like that?
When you deserve better,
Why did you stand up for me?
When she said I’m a back stabber for liking you,
When she didn’t like you anyway.

You’re the best friend anybody could have,
Yet I have more feelings for you than you’ll ever have for me.
But I don’t care,
As long as you’ll always be my friend,
And do what’s best for you.

Hey there! Even though you put this in "other" I'm going to review it a bit like a poem because it seems to fit that area most.

This is a great start, perhaps, but it reads more like a journal entry than a poem. A good poem will make the reader feel and understand, but here I don't really know what your talking about. What did this guy's friends do to him to make them so horrible? What happened to the speaker to make her a "backstabber"? You talk a lot more about things that happen, make statements, speak to the other person, but I don't know what you're feeling and I don't feel any of it. Poetry is a great form of expression but it should still keep the reader in mind! ^^

Every time you hold [s]you hold[/s] me in your arms and tell me that I’m a great friend.

I watch your pure blue eyes,

"pure, blue eyes" is cliché in my opinion. Sure, the person might have blue eyes and that is the truth, but how can you make his blue eyes unique from all the other blue-eyed people in the world?

Also, just a small note not regarding the poem, chat speak isn't allowed on YWS so next time you want to say "know" I think you should write it out.

Good luck!

Thanks ^^