What do I do with you? (Rap and Rock)

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It has been a huge number of years
You thought through this, that I had no ears
-You cried!
-you lied
-wolf too many times
I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you

-what! Do! I do with you?
I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you
It is a hard decision to make

After the friendship we had
Problem that it is going to end all bad
This dissection is really hard to make
I try to listen to my heart
This is not easy like a piece of cake
You have tied me to many knots
As you do this our friendship rots and rots

What! Do! I do with you?
I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you
It is a hard decision to make

You are like a fly
That thinks that when you are about to die
I will come and save you
When ever you will get stuck in a web
A vicious spider
comes near
“Ow, my god it’s a rider passing me by.
Can you help me?
Can you save me?” you ask
But this time I pass
Now I have made my decision

What! Do! I do with you?
I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you
It is a hard decision to make
Last edited by lordgluzman on Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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I remember. You helped me to write this poem. Thank you dude I even like it a little bit more.
Blood is red
But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
And take you




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Hey!

Nice job! Like this song.

I thought I read it before now but I haven't
Well I read it now and I like it :D

Another good work by the Lordgluzman!

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