What to write

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Hi, I know this poem is silly and stuff, but I just wan't you to know it's for fun my poems are usually better than this.

What to write, what to type, I have been up all night. I wish I may I wish I might find some type of a poem to write. I love writing poems, it's a delight, so I should think of something soon right?
Last edited by jcloud14 on Fri Oct 31, 2008 3:22 am, edited 1 time in total.




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This is not a review but why would you put this in public
Those who control their passions do so because their passions are weak enough to be controlled.
- William Blake
Lord, grant me chastity and continence... but not yet.
St. Augustine
When all else fails, we can whip the horses eyes




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No... OK first of all it is not stupid. I can't even begin to tell you how many times i just sit up at night and think of what to write and can't. once i had a writers block for like: a month. I swear.... i cried. Never be ashamed to say that you don't have anything to say. For me there is not enough creativity in my house for me... i have to adventure outdoors and if that doesn't work... Then Jesus Help me!!! of course it's only something that writers have for a period of time... now I'm writing all the time.
NO ONE HAS ANY IDEA HOW MUCH THEY EFFECT ME UNTIL THEY READ MY WORK BECAUSE I WRITE MY FEELINGS IN EVERY POEM, SONG OR BOOK I WRITE. :)... HALF OF MY HEART BELONGS TO ME...THE REST BELONGS TO MY READERS...




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You need some major punctuation. You need to divide up the lines.
As your pretty, so be wise,
Wolves may lurk in every guise.




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Yeah that's pretty cool to think of when there's nothing else. But if you wrote that when you had nothing to write, Isn't that something to write in itself? :? <-(don't know if that makes sense or not). I wish I could even write a poem for for not having anything to write.
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If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
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