J'ecris, Nous Ecrivons

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lilchoma
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Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:28 pm
lilchoma says... · Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:28 pm
Tap
Click
Tappity
Clickity
Clack
Tip

Off we go,
Tapping away
Words we can't say.

Click tap
Enter key
Tippity clack, shift C.

Spelling words,
Meaning more,
To know us to the core.

Write to the world,
Discover ourselves,
Cover pages, books, shelves.

Wonder what
We don't know,
Change what we do.

Paint the sky
A color
Other than blue.

Tap
Clack
Tippity
Clackity
Click
Tip

And then stop,
With a sudden,
Heavy, clockity top.
Last edited by lilchoma on Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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errtu2
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Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:18 am
errtu2 says... · Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:18 am
this cheered me up in a way that poetry rarely does. This piece is lighthearted without being airy. Now i dont know if it was a joke, i laughed, but it may be a typo, when you said "wods we cant say" is it words? Well, no matter, either way it conveys a point.

Keep it right up my friend.
Those who control their passions do so because their passions are weak enough to be controlled.
- William Blake
Lord, grant me chastity and continence... but not yet.
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lilchoma
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Tue Oct 21, 2008 7:32 pm
lilchoma says... · Tue Oct 21, 2008 7:32 pm
oh dear, that was a typo actually...and thank you much for your review, it was very encouraging...
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