First Attempt- Old Story

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dg241506
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:27 am
dg241506 says... · Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:27 am
This is an old story i wrote in a highschool creative writing class. Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
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You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World