Poisoned Roses--Chapter 6

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Merry_Haven:

Yeah, I wanted to put some comedy in there. Everyone loves a good comedy :wink: lol

But yeah, I like the Beatles myself, so I was like, she should be an oldies, classic girl too! :D

Again, thanks so much for taking the time to read all of these. It means a lot to me!
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"Woe to the man whose heart has not learned while young to hope, to love—and to put his trust in life."
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Ash,

sooooo mch better.

i like the pretty-boy and pretty girl thing.

that's was wrong what carmen did. You should keep your promises.

this seems a lot more smoother than before( i know i keep repeat myself, but i mean it.)

well, i have to go to class now. i will read chapter 7 when i have time at home.
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Night Mistress:

Thanks! :D

I'm glad this is getting better as the story goes on!

Thanks again, Bri!
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Hey Ash,

I loved this chapter!! My favorite part was when Isaac and Sophia started singing along to the Beatles's song. It was nice that they finally had a moment together without Carmen and the rest of the gang interfering. Another lovely chapter. Can't wait to read the rest.

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Angel of Death:

Yeah, I love the Beatles myself so I decided to put a little me into this story :wink: hehe

Thanks so much for reading this! :D
"Woe to the man whose heart has not learned while young to hope, to love—and to put his trust in life."
~ Joseph Conrad


"Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life."
~ Red Auerbach



Journeys end in lovers' meeting.
— William Shakespeare