Randomness of ....chilli

4 posts
Random avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 3
Chicken Scratch!!!- By Chali

KC MOON


The people of Azkaban want to know if Harry Potter is dead. For this reason we came to investigate at Daniel Ross’ house. Will we find Harry’s body? This is the exact interview we had with this evil-hearted man!

KC Moon: did you kill Harry Potter?

DR: What?...who?...QUE?! POTTER?!!!!....wassat?

KC Moon: DID YOU KILL HARRY POTTER?!

DR: Me no English……you have English muffin?

KC Moon: you want a F-ing MUFFIN?!

DR: Yaaaa, give me muffin……please mister sushi

KC Moon: …..if you tell us where you hid Potter, we’re gona buy you loads of muffins!!!

DR:…And crack too?

KC Moon: **** NO!!!!!

DR: Ok, me no tell….cuz u no buy me muffin

KC Moon: We said we will buy you muffins, please tell us where his body is.

DR: it is in the…..HEY WHO IS THAT?!

KC Moon: just tell us the F-ING place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sam: yo

DR: qu̔

KC Moon: we have your son in custody

DR: asduio fhaija

KC Moon: THIS IS MADNESS!

Sam: woohoo!

KC Moon: you! Stop dancing!

DR: you know what… I’m just gonna go

KC Moon: wait!! NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sam: I’m sober

KC Moon: WHERE’S THEOGHUWBG VSU B I mean the body

Sam: Daniel come back!!!!!

DR: huh…what?

Sam: tell them, tell them the truth!

DR: ok, ok, I will. I’M IN LOVE WITH A CHIPMUNK!!!!!!

Sam: no you idiot! Not that! The other truth!!!!!!!!!!!

DR: es in mi mochila

KC Moon: how bout we go to Subway

Sam: they’re having a sale on burritos and skirts and chicken pot pies with eggs and gravy with a side of coleslaw

DR: NO WAY!! QUE VA!

KC Moon: Holy Shizdooooorag

Anh: I hate you!

THE end


Chicken Scratch!!!- By Chali

KC MOON


The people of Azkaban want to know if Harry Potter is dead. For this reason we came to investigate at Daniel Ross’ house. Will we find Harry’s body? This is the exact interview we had with this evil-hearted man!

KC Moon: did you kill Harry Potter?

DR: What?...who?...QUE?! POTTER?!!!!....wassat?

KC Moon: DID YOU KILL HARRY POTTER?!

DR: Me no English……you have English muffin?

KC Moon: you want a F-ing MUFFIN?!

DR: Yaaaa, give me muffin……please mister sushi

KC Moon: …..if you tell us where you hid Potter, we’re gona buy you loads of muffins!!!

DR:…And crack too?

KC Moon: **** NO!!!!!

DR: Ok, me no tell….cuz u no buy me muffin

KC Moon: We said we will buy you muffins, please tell us where his body is.

DR: it is in the…..HEY WHO IS THAT?!

KC Moon: just tell us the F-ING place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sam: yo

DR: qu̔

KC Moon: we have your son in custody

DR: asduio fhaija

KC Moon: THIS IS MADNESS!

Sam: woohoo!

KC Moon: you! Stop dancing!

DR: you know what… I’m just gonna go

KC Moon: wait!! NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sam: I’m sober

KC Moon: WHERE’S THEOGHUWBG VSU B I mean the body

Sam: Daniel come back!!!!!

DR: huh…what?

Sam: tell them, tell them the truth!

DR: ok, ok, I will. I’M IN LOVE WITH A CHIPMUNK!!!!!!

Sam: no you idiot! Not that! The other truth!!!!!!!!!!!

DR: es in mi mochila

KC Moon: how bout we go to Subway

Sam: they’re having a sale on burritos and skirts and chicken pot pies with eggs and gravy with a side of coleslaw

DR: NO WAY!! QUE VA!

KC Moon: Holy Shizdooooorag

Anh: I hate you!

THE end




Random avatar
Gender Male
Points 300
Reviews 0
oops whyd you press paste when i pushed ctr + v?!! lol good times...




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 516
First of all, Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a good time here and meet loads of great people (which, of course, you will)

Here on YWS we have a 2:1 reviewing policy. We ask that you make two critiques before posting your own piece.

There's not a lot here for me to critique, so here I go.

1. This is totally random. What on earth is supposed to be happening?

2. Why did you paste it in twice?

3. Who is Daniel Ross? When you say Harry Potter, we either expect future characters with some connection to the ones we already know, or characters who we already know. I've never heard of Daniel Ross.Do you mean Daniel Radcliffe, the guy who plays Harry Potter?

Overall, I didn't understand this. Please explain.

Good luck, and welcome to our website!
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*




Random avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 3
ummmm, i dont know why and what happened when chali and I were pasting it. oh no...not Daniel radcliffe. this was all out of good fun. We wanted Daniel Ross.

If you really do want to understand it, I will explain...it is just randomness. i....

Yea, we'll post better things later on. this was just the start. lol....



But even the worst decisions we make don't necessarily remove us from the circle of humanity.
— Wes Moore, The Other Wes Moore