Wow. Very long, but very nice. This blows any of my attempts at free-verse out of the water, that's for sure.
At first I thought the odd spacing were errors, but after I looked it over again, I realized it worked surprisingly well.
It starts out so well-worded and structured, but by the end the power behind the words is impressive. It's a good combination, and the transition was flawless.
Definitely one of your better poems. Good job!
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