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It was posed for a strick. She turned and with out warning she was takled away from the thing as it jumped on dirt. It disapeared and Amber looked up on her savior. It was Leon. She gave a smie of thanks as he turned red and scrambled off her.

*This topic is kinda bland...*
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Am I really too late to join?

If not, here's my character.

Name - Layla Bluefields

Age - 14

Appearence - http://content.answers.com/main/content ... a_Qiao.jpg
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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It's never too late to join.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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*Thanks.

Okay, is my character (in the story) with your characters or somewhere else?*
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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Layla fell down the tree, on which she had been hiding in. She had been spying her friends from the moment they entered the forest. But she hadn't expected a wolf to come.

All five children looked up at the girl now sprawled on the ground.

Layla got up quickly and brushed her self.

"Hi, what's up?" she asked unconcernly
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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*yeah i just dont no what to do, shall we start somewhere else?*
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*sure. SOmeone else start* Me bad at it* :(
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
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~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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*ok i have a plot, its in a boarding school and in the holiday the teachers dissapeer, the kids look round the school finding secrets, near death and ghosts ok, Amber I need you to make a boy called Ashley ok and Amber goes out with Leon*



Name:Jason

Age:15

Apperance, slim, tall, emo boy with blonde hair.
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Layla, Savior, Amber and Stacy all meet up in the corridoor to meet the boys, Jason Ashley and leon. ''hey girls ready to explore'' Amber held Leon hand as he said this.
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Name: Ashley

He is just a boy that Amber know. He desided t tag along.

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http://maihiwa.deviantart.com/art/Black-hair-70486853

There you go. This does kinda sound interesting but Amber and Leon have only just started going out so yeah...*

"SOunds fun to me," Amber said as she leaned her head slightly on Leon's shoulder. She stole a glance at Ashley who wasn't much of a talker. He nodded.
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I will make a girl called Emily to go out wiv ashley.

''We'll pick up Emily later''Said Leon, ''lets go to the kitchen, i straving''
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"Huh? The kitchen? Is that where we're are gonna explore?" asked Layla

** I have an idea. I don't know if you'll agree, but can't we have Leon only having a crush on Amber at first, and afterwards they fall in love? **
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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*yeah*

''What are you doing Leon''Amber said,''and no were just hungrey'' Even though Amber said this she still held his hand.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!



The most important thing is to have fun! Stress makes for distress and neither of those belong in writing!
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