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Chanson
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Wed May 18, 2005 9:50 pm
Chanson says... · Wed May 18, 2005 9:50 pm
i lioked it, the words are easy on the eyes if that makes any sense. but it didn't blow me away or make me feel anything, it just looked pretty.
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Zion
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Wed May 18, 2005 11:34 pm
Zion says... · Wed May 18, 2005 11:34 pm
Yeah same here. I had the effect of a something written in a rush. Just a pile of pretty words. Its not as good as the others (from you) but is not bad as well.
Without sensibility no object would be given to us, without understanding no object would be thought. Thoughts without content are empty, intuitions without concepts are blind.

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Chevy
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Thu May 19, 2005 1:21 pm
Chevy says... · Thu May 19, 2005 1:21 pm
I guess I would have to go with the exact oppisite of what Arvandor said...to me, this is one of the best poems I've read by you along the Grant line.

"okay, last piece for this saga, i swear...."

Well, this is a fine piece to end with...now, just put them all together and you'll have wonderful story!
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
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