But didDon't start a sentence with an interjection.
paranoia, heSemi-colon instead of a comma.
her, andTake out And and replace the comma with a semi-colon.
tomorrow, andNo comma.
He would take her to the club tomorrow, and tell her then. Right after he bribed DJ into playing her favorite song.Combine these two sentences.
her, andNo comma.
played, theySemi-colon.
He didn’t care what game he played, they were all mind numbing at three in the morning. So any game would do.Combine these two sentences.
up, andNo comma.
groaned, why’dSemi-colon.
yeah. LastCapitalize the Y in Yeah.
Oh wellComma and add Are after it.
you knewCapitalize the Y in You.
He glanced at his mom, she was preparing his weekly chores list."He glanced at his mom, who was preparing his weekly chores list."
makinMakin'
damn it really wasTake this out.
II’llI'll
Okay byeComma after Okay.
The three tasks he set forth on first. Eagerly anticipating the night.Combine this two sentences.
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