The Girl Whose Mouth Moves Full Speed, No Traffic Lights

I know I've already posted this but I just wandered if it was too short to be considered for publication?



I feel intimidating.

I won't beat you up, but, I could bring you down.

Because of my full speed, no traffic lights mouth

You wouldn't know where to go

Then again, it would be bad for me too.

it might be a bit short to be published, but i guess it depends on where you where thinking of submitting it...

i didn't read the first one you posted, so let me just say that i really liked this, despite it's length.


-GC10

Thanks (:
The first version was just the same to be honest.

Please don't double post. Comments for this poem should resume in the original thread

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