I Want A Guy

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I want a boy.
A nice and bad boy.
A boy who has buzzed hair and lets me play with it.
He'll tell me we're like Corey and Topanga.
He'll give me his favorite sweatshirt.
He'll call me at 3am and ask me what I’m doing.
He'll tell me he couldn't fall asleep because he
was thinking about me,
and He needed to hear my voice.
He'll text me every morning before school saying
"Have a great day babe I love you!"
And he'll always whisper something sweet in my ear.
He'll take me to a concert to see his favorite band.
And he won’t get embarrassed to tell me he loves me in front of his friends.
When I cry he'll tell me I'm too beautiful to and
He'll kiss every tear away.
He'll always make me feel better because
He knows the perfect things to say to me.
All of his friends will know we're in love because
He'll talk about me to them.
He'll stay up with me all night when I’m sick.
When we're walking together
He'll stop and pick up a flower and put it behind my ear.
He'll love everything about me and tell me that I'm perfect.
We'll always end up laughing about silly fights.
We won’t get mad for making fun of each other because
We crack up at every bit of it.
Even if we're a million years old, butterflies will still go crazy inside
of me ...
Every time he kisses me.
He'll tell me he'd die without me.
He'll surprise me by bringing me over my favorite food
When I'm having a bad day,
He'll think I'm beautiful if I dressed so crappy it was classy.
When we go out for ice cream, he'll put some on my nose.
Then I'll put some all over his face.
And we'll just never stop laughing.
He wouldn’t be scared to cry in front of me--
--and would hold me when I cry ..
He’ll introduce me to his friends as the coolest girl he's ever met.
He'll buy me jewelry and bouncy balls from vending machines.
We'll have contests of how far we could spit our gum, or how far
We could jump off a swing.
He'll take walks with me in the snow, and
we'll catch snowflakes on our tongues
He doesn't even like snow, but I love it.
He'll grab my waist and kiss my neck.
And we'd always take pictures in photo booths.
He'll let me go places with his mom.
We would play tag and not care who’s watching.
We'd kiss in the rain.
And when I hear him speak, I'll fall in love all over again.
I want a boy who can argue over stupid things with me,
And then go totally soft when I got sad and apologize.
I want someone who would lay with me outside under the stars.
Someone who will squirt me with water guns in the house.
When we kissed our hips would be pressed together.
I want someone to be there no matter what ... always and forever * Perfect.
I'll be his everything.
And he'll be even more to me.
He will love me for always.
I am not perfect and i except that. I know that i have my imperfections. I get angry and sometimes i can be quite a little wiseass. So if you cant except me at my worst then you sure as hell dont deserve me at my best.




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gosh, thats really amazing.

hehe, i have written so many 'i want a guy...' poems... this just about tops it.

though...i'd add wrestling with him somewhere in there...

nice work!




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I love this, just for the sole reason that you mentioned Corey and Topanga. I thought NOBODY remembered that show! *squeels and does a happy dance* lol.
The rest of it was amazing. I loved the 'when I cry he'll tell me I'm too beautiful to' line. Aaw! and 'He wouldn't be scared to cry in front of me'. I HATE it when guys think they have to be all macho. I'm glad that you put that in there. It's great.
Well, wonderful peice. :)
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First off, welcome to the young writers society Chiara and Lina16! I'm Brooke by the way. :backtotopic: I liked this! To me this should be under other poetry, but what do I know? This was very long and I think it should have more spaces so the reader want get mixed up. But all in all, this was a good piece. Keep it up! :D
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