Witching Hour

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Seda-

He glanced up and saw Rai soar down through the hole. The little blue dragon landed on Seda's shoulder his tail curling around his throat. Rai had a calming effect on Seda, his eyes and hair changed to shimmering gold, and his wings an almost blinding white.

Seda scratched Rai on the head and glanced around the chamber. None of the circles were glowing, but there were still statues scattered around the room. "My guess is, our esteemed jail breaker, who ever he is, is out of power."

Lilith grinned as Keira came bounding over to see her. "Which means we can split, before we have to hear his Binding Terms."

"You mean terms of enslavement." Snake muttered. The four turned and left the old temple behind them without a second glance. But the moment they left the temple they felt like they were being pulled in two different directions.

"Which way is it coming from?"

"There." Seda pointed east. "And over there." Southwest.
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LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Snake didn't like this. He looked in one direction and saw mountains, and in the other was a city.
" This is not going to end well."
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Kimmy----


Kimmy watched Camo as he ran after the frisbee she had thrown for him. He jumped in the air and caught it perfectly. He ran back and dropped it at her feet as she looked towards the mountains. She sighed, "We need to go up there some time." She told Camo picking up the frisbee and throwing it again. It flew over a bench and Camo jumped over it and kept going. She laughed and sat down as Camo grabbed hold of the frisbee and landed. He ran back over dropping it at her feet. He started barking and she turned around. There was a small group of people, guys. She groaned, they always gave her a hard time. She stood up and walked towards the mountains so she could get away from them.
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Snake then sniffed the air.
" I feel something...something that will help..." Snake then pointed to the mountains." Over there."
He began to walk to the mountains
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Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.




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*go ahead, you can be the older human, or a monster that is unsealed after the others, if so, you better hurry and catch up.*
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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*keep in mind the monster lords were sealed 1500 years ago, no cars, no electricity, so they're completely new to modern life.*

Seda-

Curious Seda followed the smaller boy, while the four walked they kept glancing at the city down in the valley. The buildings gleamed in the afternoon sunlight. They walked for maybe two hours. The sun was just beginning to set when they saw a girl walking along a cliff path with her dog.

**sorry all I got.*
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*I'm so in! Sorry I'm late.*

Name: Melody

Age: 569 (18)

Gender: Female

Race: wolf girl (way different from werewolf; always looks rather wolfish and turns into an actual wolf any tine she wants to but she's in control of herself better than a werewolf)

Appearance:
normal; http://liquid-kaka.deviantart.com/art/T ... l-17863321
(short brown hair, purple eyes, black and purple ears and tail)

wolf image; http://shimmerhog27.deviantart.com/art/ ... l-75696992
(I know it's tacky, just bare with me)

Personality: being a wolf-girl, she likes to work with others to do something. She is loyal and smart and loves to help people out; she is with Kimmy.

History: she watched her whole pack die right before her eyes while she hid as a pup. She then had to go off and live on her own. She feels it is her fault but was even more furious at the people that killed them. When she tried to seek revenge, she was captured and sealed away with the other monsters. She is usually cheery, though. She does not speak of her family or that night so don't bother to bring it up unless you want to get mauled.

Powers/ Abilities: talks to animals and can turn into a wolf. She also has the wolf's sensory details too.

Weapons: a golden sword that can only kill when held by it's true master and a vial containing a potion that can heal any wound and save anyone that's dieing/ dead.

Other: up for love
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*Okay, that smiley face next to the one is supposed to be an 8 so she's really 18; the website accidently made it into a smiley*

Melody

As she broke free of her stone case, she noticed several others walk to the edge of the cliff. She shifted into the form of the wolf and, shaking the bits of dust out of her fur, she trotted over to them and sat down to see what they found so interesting.

A girl was down below them, playing in the park with her dog.

Melody leaned a bit closer. "Hmmm, a girl and her dog. How interesting," she said sarcastically, rolling her eyes.

The others had been concentrating so hard on the girl that a few of them jumped at her unannounced presence. Melody watched as the girl started running towards the mountains they were in.
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*Who can Melody be with?*
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