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[deleted1] · 2007-07-24T22:31:06Z

I'm so cold I make your heart stop, Your girl can't say shit, she's a bop. Your a harmless fool, The pussy bows down to Ja Rule. Homie fuck with the kid, I'll blow your head off like Big did. You love dissing me, But say shit to my sisters, that's a different story. homie you's a fake ass "G", gonna get smacked by the true P.I.M.P. Yo homie, I'm the next Pac, One round with me, no Guns, no Glocc. you jealous cause you not me, You a bitch ass nazi. I laugh at you little ass remarks, You a punk who hides from me in the dark. But I find you in your car, Parked up next to the gay bar. homie you's a clown, If we see eachother you gettin' throw'd down. Tell your wife to stay out, she's a whore, Tell your people, I'm ready for war.

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Mon May 05, 2008 11:40 pm

Rei says... · Mon May 05, 2008 11:40 pm

I don't think anyone is "dissing" it because it's rap. They are making negative comments about it because they don't like it.

Since I don't want to be repetative, I just have one quick comment. Be really careful in your use of words like "nazi." Keep in mind who the Nazis were, and make sure that is really the kind of image that you want to get across.

Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"

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Mon May 12, 2008 10:55 pm

C.J. Mustang says... · Mon May 12, 2008 10:55 pm

Hey, loved your poem! I just gotta say, for the people who were dissing your poem...IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHAT IT'S SAYING, DON'T READ IT!! I, for one, thought it was completely awesome. It got a point across, didn't it? :wink:

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Mon May 12, 2008 11:06 pm

Rei says... · Mon May 12, 2008 11:06 pm

C.J. Mustang wrote:Hey, loved your poem! I just gotta say, for the people who were dissing your poem...IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHAT IT'S SAYING, DON'T READ IT!! I, for one, thought it was completely awesome. It got a point across, didn't it?

How can we know what it's saying if we don't read it?

Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"

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