Mischief out at Sea

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Last edited by LoveableLittleSock on Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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I liked it, but it was awkward at times and you didn't pause at important moments.
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^_^ Downloaded. Thanks for reading DoaV! ^_^ I shall get back to you on this as soon as possible. =P
I'm like that song stuck in your head; I come and I go, but never truly dissapear.

And apparently I also write a blog.




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~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien