Lies?

I love you, he says.
But can I believe him?
Your beautiful, he says.
But is it true?
I'll never hurt you, he says.
But will he?
I'm yours forever, he says.
But is he?
I'll never leave you, he says.
But wont he?

I love you, he says.
And I believed him.

I like your poem. Those are the main things that go through a persons head when they first get into a relationship. I didn't find much of anything to critic on. Nice work.

Its a nice poem, many people have to go through it so you can connect. Keep writing!!